Topic: Suggestions On My Existence — V1 Notes
Hey God, me right here.
I do know you’re not executed with the challenge, however I needed to share suggestions on my existence whereas it’s nonetheless WIP. (We wouldn’t need one thing to get finalized that wants this a lot work nonetheless, haha.)
Just a few broad notes:
- Have you ever thought of making me taller and extra visually placing? Could be good for model recognition.
- Love, love, love the entire “capability to really feel pleasure” factor. The entire “capability to really feel ache” simply felt slightly extraneous. Might trigger unhealthy vibes. I like to recommend we nix that complete part.
- Re: the knowledge enamel, let’s pay slightly nearer consideration to element there. Appears slightly messy. And the truth that they have been impacted and I needed to eliminate them over the one single winter break the place I might need gotten again along with my ex and we’d have adopted the two.3 pug infants we have been speculated to have as we grew outdated collectively—huge miss there IMO.
And simple fixes:
- My interval? Perhaps tighten, shorten to love two hours if doable.
- Intercourse on the seashore, the drink? So enjoyable! Intercourse on the seashore, the factor? Might use some cleansing up to make sure optimum ROI.
- Faith? It’s slightly obscure—and I do know, that’s the worst be aware to get! However I do assume it’s value taking a re-evaluation. Let’s make sure that it feels prefer it suits the present local weather.
- Talking of local weather, would adore it if you happen to might take one other move on the complete world local weather disaster factor. Appears each actually scary and likewise too huge to know so I can’t actually be scared? I might suggest selecting a lane right here.
- The bizarre sharp pores and skin on the perimeters of my huge toenail can 100% go. I see what you have been attempting to do right here however it’s simply not coming throughout and I do not assume it could be well-received by a broad viewers.
- Total, think about making it punchier and extra enjoyable!
On the plus facet, manchego! Cheese typically, some actually nice artistic selections there. Your artwork course round Christmas is especially impressed (I do know that challenge has sentimental worth for you!), particularly all the flicker.
And Barack Obama’s guide—liked it, completely liked it. Nice element, don’t lose it. And I can not applaud you sufficient for that particular feeling of strolling residence on a heat summer time evening barely tipsy understanding you could have an unimaginable supreme frozen pizza within the freezer. Issues like that’s the reason you are the visionary and I am simply giving notes.
I might actually suggest wanting again at previous successes of different existences to information us. For instance, might we pull inspiration from whoever did Frida Kahlo’s artwork course? Or the robust model story that was instructed by the vessel of Hilary Duff? I believe we now have license to purpose excessive with the work, like possibly even Wikipedia-article-high.
Additionally, let’s join offline in regards to the nipple hair module. I’ve a couple of questions on why you felt that was a precious use of your time. You made me bi so I’ve executed the market analysis on different boobs. Our opponents have clearly chosen to take a distinct, extra streamlined method. Not attempting to stifle your artistic imaginative and prescient however I believe we each bear in mind the fiasco of puberty implementation and assume we could possibly clear up among the leftover points there.
And lastly, don’t hate me for this, however I couldn’t assist however deliver up that we nonetheless haven’t aligned on like… why? So if you happen to might make clear, that might be nice. Can’t wait to listen to from you and hope you may make these modifications by EOD!
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